Would you read this if this was a short story or book?

It sounds like some bittersweet love story. It could be a nice, easy read though. I can't so off of that if I'd read it, but it did interest me. I do think you should revise and change some wording, but otherwise it's good. The only thing I'd say to change for sure is describing his voice with a word other than dreamy, because you just used the word dream. But, like I said, it definitely sparked my interest.